T:Yes,a good sentence ■T:Very good. T:Yes,It's really a terrific sentence with beautiful structure.I like it
◼ T: Yes, a good sentence ! ◼ T: Very good. ◼ T: Yes, It’s really a terrific sentence with beautiful structure. I like it
Appendix 1:Feedback reading ■Feedback1 This passage,in my opinion,is one which is better than your past works.First,it is of good organization.Second,you have tried your best to have a vivid description of the sceneries.However,there is something wrong.You need to read through the passage and improve
Appendix 1: Feedback reading ◼ Feedback 1 ◼ This passage, in my opinion, is one which is better than your past works. First, it is of good organization. Second, you have tried your best to have a vivid description of the sceneries. However, there is something wrong. You need to read through the passage and improve
Feedback 2 Recently,I have sensed the changes in your writing.The misspellings have been disappearing,and the sentences are becoming fluently written and grammatically structured. There is one more point to attend to,that is the passage should be well organized before writing. And what do you think? What differences are there between the above two feedbacks?
◼ Feedback 2 ◼ Recently, I have sensed the changes in your writing. The misspellings have been disappearing, and the sentences are becoming fluently written and grammatically structured. There is one more point to attend to, that is the passage should be well organized before writing. And what do you think? ◼ What differences are there between the above two feedbacks?
Appendix 2:Feedback reading Your composition has definitely shown us a horrible scene of traffic accident. But not only this,a serious problem has been presented to us readers, indifference to an old man means indifference to us human life.Who can heal such an injury?It is a serious problem worthy of our deep consideration
Appendix 2: Feedback reading ◼ Your composition has definitely shown us a horrible scene of traffic accident. But not only this, a serious problem has been presented to us readers, indifference to an old man means indifference to us human life. Who can heal such an injury? It is a serious problem worthy of our deep consideration
Appendix 3:Feedback reading It is a hero's story,I like it.Your composition has been logically written, following the order of time,very comprehensible.But two points need to be minded.One is directed to the content.The most astonishing part (climax)is not fully described,that is to say,the plots are not vividly written. The other is you need to try to make your languages accurate
Appendix 3: Feedback reading ◼ It is a hero’s story, I like it. Your composition has been logically written, following the order of time, very comprehensible. But two points need to be minded. One is directed to the content. The most astonishing part (climax) is not fully described, that is to say, the plots are not vividly written. The other is you need to try to make your languages accurate