6.Use article Sexist:Can a critic give his opinion of an omelet without being asked to make one? Revised:Can a critic give an opinion of.?
6. Use article Sexist: Can a critic give his opinion of an omelet without being asked to make one? Revised: Can a critic give an opinion of.?
7.someone,one, the one,no one Sexist:He who can take advice is sometimes superior to him who can give it. Revised:Someone who can take advice is sometimes superior to the one who can give it
7. someone，one，the one，no one Sexist: He who can take advice is sometimes superior to him who can give it. Revised: Someone who can take advice is sometimes superior to the one who can give it
8.Repeat the noun Sexist:To find a friend one must close one eye to keep him,two Revised:To find a friend,one must close one eye to keep a friend,two
8. Repeat the noun Sexist: To find a friend one must close one eye - to keep him, two. Revised: To find a friend, one must close one eye - to keep a friend, two
Avoid Prefer businessman businessperson,businesspeople chairman chairperson,chair,president,head foreman supervisor,superintendent manmade artificial,synthetic congressman representative,legislator councilman council member policeman police officer,law enforcement officer
Avoid Prefer businessman businessperson, businesspeople chairman chairperson, chair, president, head foreman supervisor, superintendent manmade artificial, synthetic congressman representative, legislator councilman council member policeman police officer, law enforcement officer
2.Information related to the text: 1)The author:Shirley Anita St.Hill Chisholm (November 30,1924 January 1,2005)was an American politician,educator and author;a woman who fought for change in the 20th century
2. Information related to the text: 1) The author: Shirley Anita St. Hill Chisholm (November 30, 1924 – January 1, 2005) was an American politician, educator and author; a woman who fought for change in the 20th century