1997年在职研究生作文 Part L Writing (30 minutes, 15 points) Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on The problem s i have in my English study. Your composition should be based on the following outline given in Chinese Outline:①遇到哪些困难 ②产生原因 ③如何克服 The problems i have in my English study During my study of English, I meet with some problems. 主旨句) These problems are as follows.(过渡句) First of all, when I read or listen English, I always encoun ter words and expressions.(解释句 ) So vocabulary is a troublesome problen.(要点 )Secondly, with a fairly large vocabulary. i am still not able to write a vivid and fluent composition. H = Thirdly, and also the most annoying thing is after so many years studying, I could not communicate with people in English.(要点三) There are many reasons for these problems.(段落主题 a For one thing, i have no study plan to enlarge voca bulary and rearrange what have learned before. H
1997 年在职研究生作文 Part Щ Writing (30 minutes,15 points) Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a composition of no less than 100 words on The problem s I have in my English study. Your composition should be based on the following outline given in Chinese. Outline: ①遇到哪些困难 ②产生原因 ③如何克服 The problems I have in my English study During my study of English , I meet with some problems.( 主旨句)These problems are as follows. (过渡句) First of all, when I read or listen English, I always encoun ter words and expressions.(解释句 一) So vocabulary is a troublesome problem.(要点 一) Secondly, with a fairly large vocabulary. I am still not able to write a vivid and fluent composition.(要点 二) Thirdly, and also the most annoying thing is after so many years studying, I could not communicate with people in English.(要点三) There are many reasons for these problems.(段落主题 句) For one thing , I have no study plan to enlarge voca bulary and rearrange what have learned before.(要点
For another, in the process i have not summarized a complete set of methods which will instruct me in the futu re study(要点 = Beyond these obvious reasons, however lies a deeper c ause, when i study English i have not created an enviro nment to practise and use it.(要点三) For the reasons given above, i feel that in order to overc ome them above all, I should make a study schedule, for example, when I would finish Concept English when I woul d go over the former contents etc.(解释一,对应上段要点 The schedule keep an English diary more efficient and goal- specified.(作用 At the same time, I should keep an English diary and try best to find opportunities to practise English. (A The purpose of diary is not only to practise thinking a nd writing in English but also provide us an opportunity t o summarize study methods when you are free.(作用二对应 要点二和要点 = only in this way could i cultivate the habit of thinking in English and using English.(小结句) 写作解析:第一段:首句直接点题,提出在英语学习过程中遇到一些问题,然后 简练过渡,引起下文。本段的写作也可以同第二段结合在一起,如采取这样的句
一) For another, in the process, I have not summarized a complete set of methods which will instruct me in the futu re study.(要点 二) Beyond these obvious reasons, however lies a deeper c ause, when I study English , I have not created an enviro nment to practise and use it.(要点三) For the reasons given above, I feel that in order to overc ome them, above all, I should make a study schedule, for example, when I would finish Concept English, when I woul d go over the former contents etc.(解释一，对应上段要点 一) The schedule keep an English diary more efficient and goal-specified.(作用 一) At the same time, I should keep an English diary and try best to find opportunities to practise English.(解释 二) The purpose of diary is not only to practise thinking a nd writing in English ,but also provide us an opportunity t o summarize study methods when you are free .(作用二对应 要点二和要点 三) only in this way could I cultivate the habit of thinking in English and using English.(小结句) 写作解析：第一段：首句直接点题，提出在英语学习过程中遇到一些问题，然后 简练过渡，引起下文。本段的写作也可以同第二段结合在一起，如采取这样的句
型结构 i have been studying English for many years and yet t here are three which have always been holding back my p rogress. One is that another is that the third is that 这种写法的好处是充分利用英语的现在完成进行时的语法功能, 加强语气,然后列举问题,条理清晰,是考生应该思考借鉴的方法。 第二段:呼应提纲第一项要求,仍然以陈述句列举出产生困难的原因。在叙述原 因时,有很多成熟和固定的句型、结构可以选择使用。 第三段:本段针对上面产生的原因逐一困难产生的原因,其内容层次有浅入深, 由表面原因学习无计划性到不掌握学习方法'直至`忽略了语言学习的规律: 具有一个语言学习环境"。写作中,作者也是采用固定句型,整体读来,层次分 明、有条不紊 第四段:以 For the reasons given above, i feel that in order to over come them。。。。″轻松过渡到阐述解决方法上来。本段写作要注意对应 上文,即上面提出的原因,下面就需要给出办法。 此类文章难度不大,考生只要根据提纲,将问题、原因、解决方法陈述清楚即可。 因为属于说明文范畴,大量的因定句型,词组,衔接结构可以选择使用: 解释原因、分析影响的常用句型和例句说明: 1)There are many (different/several/various)reasons for this matter(changedecrease/growth). For one thing For anoth In addition .... Furthermore 例句
型结构 “ I have been studying English for many years, and yet t here are three which have always been holding back my p rogress. One is that ……… another is that …… the third is that ………”这种写法的好处是充分利用英语的现在完成进行时的语法功能， 加强语气，然后列举问题，条理清晰，是考生应该思考借鉴的方法。 第二段：呼应提纲第一项要求，仍然以陈述句列举出产生困难的原因。在叙述原 因时，有很多成熟和固定的句型、结构可以选择使用。 第三段：本段针对上面产生的原因逐一困难产生的原因，其内容层次有浅入深， 由表面原因“学习无计划性”到“不掌握学习方法”直至“忽略了语言学习的规律： 具有一个语言学习环境”。写作中，作者也是采用固定句型，整体读来，层次分 明、有条不紊。 第四段：以 “For the reasons given above, I feel that in order to over come them。。。。” 轻松过渡到阐述解决方法上来。本段写作要注意对应 上文，即上面提出的原因，下面就需要给出办法。 此类文章难度不大，考生只要根据提纲，将问题、原因、解决方法陈述清楚即可。 因为属于说明文范畴，大量的因定句型，词组，衔接结构可以选择使用： 解释原因、分析影响的常用句型和例句说明： 1) There are many(different/several/various) reasons for this matter(change/decrease/growth). For one thing ……..For anoth er ………In addition………..Furthermore…………… 例句：
There are several reasons for his decision of studying of st udying law. For one thing he is very interested in social affairs and it seems the best way to enable him to engag e in these activities. For another, his father is a lawyer,w ho has always encouraged him to do something similar. In addition, he is sure that he can get a job after graduati on 2)A number of factors contribute to (lead to /result in/ a ccount for)…… and what's more 例句: A number of factors contribute to changing moral values-sel f-indulgence, the lack of social consciousness and the deg eneration of the society itself 3 We may consider (regard/think of /take the change (phe nomenon/decrease/ development/the suddenly rise )as a sign ( symbo/ evidence/ landmark)of……… but the truth is that 例句: We may take the change as a symbol of social developme nt, but the truth is that it will only lead to social corrup tion
There are several reasons for his decision of studying of st udying law . For one thing, he is very interested in social affairs and it seems the best way to enable him to engag e in these activities. For another, his father is a lawyer, w ho has always encouraged him to do something similar. In addition , he is sure that he can get a job after graduati on. 2)A number of factors contribute to (lead to /result in / a ccount for )……..and what’s more ……… 例句： A number of factors contribute to changing moral values-sel f-indulgence , the lack of social consciousness and the deg eneration of the society itself. 3) We may consider (regard/think of /take)the change (phe nomenon/ decrease/ development/the suddenly rise)as a sign (symbol/evidence/landmark)of ………but the truth is that ……. 例句： We may take the change as a symbol of social developme nt , but the truth is that it will only lead to social corrup tion
4)The explanation for the matter( decrease/rise / change/ ph enomenon)of .. involves many (different/complicated/puzzlin gfactors(reasons/ aspects 例句 The explanation for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suicide rate involves many complicated factors. Some attribu te the rise to an overemphasis on early success others po int to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion over changing social values 5)The reasons for ...are many but for the most part center on (concentrate on /focus on) 例句: The reasons for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suici de rate involves many complicated factors. some attribute t he rise to an overemphasis on early success, others point to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion ov er changing social values 6There are several causes for this significant growth first second finally 7We have reason to believe that 8This can be expressed as follows
4) The explanation for the matter(decrease/rise /change/ ph enomenon) of …….involves many (different/complicated/puzzlin g)factors(reasons/aspects) 例句： The explanation for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suicide rate involves many complicated factors. Some attribu te the rise to an overemphasis on early success, others po int to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion over changing social values. 5) The reasons for ……….are many, but for the most part center on (concentrate on /focus on)…….. 例句： The reasons for the phenomenon of the rising teenage suici de rate involves many complicated factors. Some attribute t he rise to an overemphasis on early success, others point to mounting peer pressure, and still others to confusion ov er changing social values. 6)There are several causes for this significant growth in ………, first……….second…………finally………… 7)We have reason to believe that …………. 8)This can be expressed as follows: