Unit Six Matriculation Fixation Joe Queenan I.Teaching Aims: 1.To get students know the style of narrative writing. 2.To have students hold a discussion about the theme of the essay. 3.To get students grasp the key words and sentence structures. II.Teaching Importance and Difficulties: 1.Understand the author's main purpose of writing the essay. 2.Know the writing strategies of the text. 3.Grasp the key language points in the text. III.Teaching periods:6 periods IV.Teaching steps: 1.Pre-reading activities: 1)Why do some people in modern time have an obsessive interest in attending elite colleges? 2)How do universities influence our life? 2.Information related to the text: About the author: About the text:In the essay the author offers his sincere advice to those parents who have college-bound children.He first criticizes some parents who try to select universities for their children.He points out that a good university does not necessarily guarantee a successful career.This is supported by the example of his high school friends.Then he tells those disillusioned parents whose children are unlikely to enter prestigious universities that many people achieve huge success in this society without a degree from a prestigious university.This is supported by his own experience.Finally he reminds those parents that "life doesn't have just one act.There is often Act Two.And Act Five." 3.Detailed Study of the Text: Text Analysis The whole text can be divided into 5 parts. Part I.(Paras.1-2):These two paragraphs make up the introductory part in which the author uses an anecdote as a starting point of the essay. Part II.(Paras 3-4):As a response to the man's story,the author tries to give some advice by relating his own experiences,i.e.his high school friends,his university days, and his present career. Part III.(Paras.5-6):It should be noted that the man is not very responsive and interested in the author's account,which evokes the author's comment "I never did find out why he was visiting the hospital. Part IV.(Paras.7-8):These two paragraphs play an important role in the essay.On the one hand,they are the author's comments elicited by the incident;on the other hand, they function as a transition to further discussion on the matter
Unit Six Matriculation Fixation Joe Queenan I. Teaching Aims: 1. To get students know the style of narrative writing. 2. To have students hold a discussion about the theme of the essay. 3. To get students grasp the key words and sentence structures. II. Teaching Importance and Difficulties: 1. Understand the author’s main purpose of writing the essay. 2. Know the writing strategies of the text. 3. Grasp the key language points in the text. III. Teaching periods: 6 periods IV. Teaching steps: 1. Pre-reading activities: 1) Why do some people in modern time have an obsessive interest in attending elite colleges? 2) How do universities influence our life? 2. Information related to the text: About the author: About the text: In the essay the author offers his sincere advice to those parents who have college- bound children. He first criticizes some parents who try to select universities for their children. He points out that a good university does not necessarily guarantee a successful career. This is supported by the example of his high school friends. Then he tells those disillusioned parents whose children are unlikely to enter prestigious universities that many people achieve huge success in this society without a degree from a prestigious university. This is supported by his own experience. Finally he reminds those parents that "life doesn't have just one act. There is often Act Two. And Act Five." 3. Detailed Study of the Text: Text Analysis The whole text can be divided into 5 parts. Part I. (Paras. 1-2): These two paragraphs make up the introductory part in which the author uses an anecdote as a starting point of the essay. Part II. (Paras 3-4): As a response to the man's story, the author tries to give some advice by relating his own experiences, i.e. his high school friends, his university days, and his present career. Part III. (Paras. 5-6): It should be noted that the man is not very responsive and interested in the author's account, which evokes the author's comment "I never did find out why he was visiting the hospital. " Part IV. (Paras. 7-8): These two paragraphs play an important role in the essay. On the one hand, they are the author’s comments elicited by the incident; on the other hand, they function as a transition to further discussion on the matter
Part V(Paras.9-15):He points out that a good university does not necessarily guarantee a successful career.This is supported by the example of his high school friends.Then he tells those disillusioned parents whose children are unlikely to enter prestigious universities that many people achieve huge success in this society without a degree from a prestigious university. Analysis Part L (Paras.1-2): These two paragraphs make up the introductory part in which the author uses an anecdote as a starting point of the essay. 1)"bright but not brilliant"(Paragraph 2)-smart but not outstanding. 2)"with other college-bound children in the family queue"(Paragraph 2)-with a number of children in a family who are going to go to college one after another in a few years. Discussion questions What does the sentence."fewer contacts would be made"mean? The sentence means that since it was a local university,there would be fewer chances to establish a network of interpersonal relationships that could be potentially helpful in the future. Language points Part II.(Paras 3-4): As a response to the man's story,the author tries to give some advice by relating his own experiences,i.e.his high school friends,his university days,and his present career. 1)"a man of the world"(Paragraph 3)-a man who has lots of experience in coping with certain situations or people. 2)"the most intimate details"(Paragraph 3)-most personal or confidential details. 3)"in question"(Paragraph 3)-being talked about,under discussion. 4)"to carve out a nice little niche for myself"(Paragraph 4)-secure myself a good and comfortable position by hard work and great effort. 5)"Pressed for biographical data"(Paragraph 4)-urged to give personal information. Discussion questions What does the author mean by ".the sun never set without my thanking God for. ? The author means that every day he felt grateful to God for what he learnt from his talented and dedicated professors. Language points 3.I told the man that many of my high school friends had graduated from the second-tier university in question and had gone on to live rich,full lives.-I told the man that many of my high school friends had graduated from the second-class university his daughter would be attending,and now they are all living full and fruitful lives. I was out of town on the night in question
Part V (Paras. 9-15): He points out that a good university does not necessarily guarantee a successful career. This is supported by the example of his high school friends. Then he tells those disillusioned parents whose children are unlikely to enter prestigious universities that many people achieve huge success in this society without a degree from a prestigious university. Analysis Part I. (Paras. 1-2): These two paragraphs make up the introductory part in which the author uses an anecdote as a starting point of the essay. 1) "bright but not brilliant"(Paragraph 2) - smart but not outstanding. 2) "with other college-bound children in the family queue" (Paragraph 2) - with a number of children in a family who are going to go to college one after another in a few years. Discussion questions What does the sentence. "fewer contacts would be made" mean? The sentence means that since it was a local university, there would be fewer chances to establish a network of interpersonal relationships that could be potentially helpful in the future. Language points Part II. (Paras 3-4): As a response to the man's story, the author tries to give some advice by relating his own experiences, i.e. his high school friends, his university days, and his present career. 1) "a man of the world" (Paragraph 3) - a man who has lots of experience in coping with certain situations or people. 2) "the most intimate details" (Paragraph 3) - most personal or confidential details. 3) "in question" (Paragraph 3) - being talked about, under discussion. 4) "to carve out a nice little niche for myself" (Paragraph 4) - secure myself a good and comfortable position by hard work and great effort. 5) "Pressed for biographical data" (Paragraph 4) - urged to give personal information. Discussion questions What does the author mean by ". the sun never set without my thanking God for . "? The author means that every day he felt grateful to God for what he learnt from his talented and dedicated professors. Language points 3. I told the man that many of my high school friends had graduated from the second-tier university in question and had gone on to live rich, full lives. -I told the man that many of my high school friends had graduated from the second -class university his daughter would be attending, and now they are all living full and fruitful lives. I was out of town on the night in question
I have no idea of the man in question. 4.I told him that I myself had graduated from a second-echelon Philadelphia university not unlike the one his daughter was entering,and had managed to carve out a little niche for myself.-I told him that I myself had graduated from a second-class university in Philadelphia,just like the one his daughter was entering, and had managed to establish quite a successful career for myself. She carved out a reputation for herself as an aggressive businesswoman He hopes to carve out a niche for himself as a successful writer. Lloyd has carved out a niche for himself as a professional tennis player. Part III.(Paras.5-6): It should be noted that the man is not very responsive and interested in the author's account,which evokes the author's comment"I never did find out why he was visiting the hospital. "he was devastated"(Paragraph 5)-he was extremely upset and worried. Note the shift of viewpoint in Paragraph 5:"pathetic curriculum vitae"and"his daughter.was going to end up as big a failure as I"are both from the man's point of view. Discussion questions Language points 5.Though he tried to feign interest in my pathetic curriculum vitae,I could see that he was devastated.-Though he acted as if he was interested in my pitiable CV,I could see that he was upset. She responded to his remarks with feigned amusement. I don't want to go tonight-I think I shall feign an excuse. Are you telling me you're frightened to speak to her?Don't be so pathetic After the accident he became a pathetic figure,a shadow of his former self. Part IV.(Paras.7-8): These two paragraphs play an important role in the essay.On the one hand,they are the author's comments elicited by the incident;on the other hand,they function as a transition to further discussion on the matter. 1)"the neurotic gabbiness"(Paragraph 7)-tendency to talk excessively because of oversensitivity to or over-indulgence in certain topics. 2)I know whereof speak-I know what I speak of 3)"On this subject,I am completely lapped out."(Paragraph 7)-I have no interest in this subject at all. "be lapped out":be eliminated in a race Discussion questions 1)Why does the author say that he will never participate in a mind-numbing discussion about college selection process,once his kids have left home? The author believes that such discussions are meaningless or even harmful.Here,he seems to suggest that for those parents who happen to make the right selections for their children or whose children go to prestigious universities such a topic would be self-aggrandizing,but for those who fail to make the right selections or whose children go to less prestigious universities such a topic would be self-flagellatory
I have no idea of the man in question. 4. I told him that I myself had graduated from a second-echelon Philadelphia university not unlike the one his daughter was entering, and had managed to carve out a little niche for myself. - I told him that I myself had graduated from a second-class university in Philadelphia, just like the one his daughter was entering, and had managed to establish quite a successful career for myself. She carved out a reputation for herself as an aggressive businesswoman. He hopes to carve out a niche for himself as a successful writer. Lloyd has carved out α niche for himself as a professional tennis player. Part III. (Paras. 5-6): It should be noted that the man is not very responsive and interested in the author's account, which evokes the author's comment "I never did find out why he was visiting the hospital. " "he was devastated" (Paragraph 5) - he was extremely upset and worried. Note the shift of viewpoint in Paragraph 5: "pathetic curriculum vitae" and "his daughter . was going to end up as big a failure as I" are both from the man's point of view. Discussion questions Language points 5. Though he tried to feign interest in my pathetic curriculum vitae, I could see that he was devastated. - Though he acted as if he was interested in my pitiable CV, I could see that he was upset. She responded to his remarks with feigned amusement. I don't want to go tonight - I think I shall feign an excuse. Are you telling me you're frightened to speak to her? Don't be so pathetic ! After the accident he became a pathetic figure, a shadow of his former self. Part IV. (Paras. 7-8): These two paragraphs play an important role in the essay. On the one hand, they are the author’s comments elicited by the incident; on the other hand, they function as a transition to further discussion on the matter. 1) “the neurotic gabbiness” (Paragraph 7) - tendency to talk excessively because of oversensitivity to or over-indulgence in certain topics. 2) I know whereof speak - I know what I speak of 3) "On this subject, I am completely lapped out." (Paragraph 7) - I have no interest in this subject at all. "be lapped out": be eliminated in a race Discussion questions 1) Why does the author say that he will never participate in a mind-numbing discussion about college selection process, once his kids have left home? The author believes that such discussions are meaningless or even harmful. Here, he seems to suggest that for those parents who happen to make the right selections for their children or whose children go to prestigious universities such a topic would be self- aggrandizing, but for those who fail to make the right selections or whose children go to less prestigious universities such a topic would be self-flagellatory
2)What does cribbage stand for? Cribbage is a card game.Here it is used in contrast to "mind-numbing discussion." Thus it stands for something entertaining,rather than boring or afflicting. Language points 6.This lack of interest does not stem from pure selfishness or unalloyed contempt for other people's offspring.-The reason why I am not interested in it is not because I am selfish or look down upon other people's children. Her problems stem from her difficult childhood. He said that children's bad behavior often stems from boredom.unalloyed blessings unalloyed relief We had the perfect holiday-two weeks of unalloyed bliss. Part V(Paras.9-15): Paragraph 9 In this paragraph the author criticizes parents who try to make the selection of colleges for their children. 1)The most infuriating conversation is the one where the parent clearly seeks a decisive career-validating moment of emotional closure.-The most annoying conversation is the one where the parent tries to be emotionally settled once for all by selecting for the child a good college that guarantees his or her future career. 2)"closure"-when an event or a period of time is brought to an end,or the feeling that something has been completely dealt with. Funerals help give people a sense of closure. 3)"economic mirth"-happiness and contentment with economic success 4)".issuing a sotto voce taunt to parents of the less gifted"-.sneering or laughing quietly at those parents of less gifted children 5)"their children's destinations"-their children's entry into top universities Discussion questions Language points 7.Such individuals believe that securing admission to a top-flight university provides child with an irrevocable passport to success-Such people believe that if a child succeeds in getting admission to a first-rate university,then he or she will be guaranteed successful future. He's one of our top-flight engineers. The decision will not be irrevocable until everyone concerned has been consulted Closing the factory would irrevocably alter the character of the local community for the worse. Paragraph 10 In this paragraph the author airs his view,which is different from that of the parent mentioned in the preceding paragraph.He argues that a good university does not necessarily guarantee a successful career,and asserts that parents'responsibility does not end when their children leave home for university. 1)".age seventeen.Or twenty-one"-a child is supposed to enter college at seventeen and graduate at twenty-one
2) What does cribbage stand for? Cribbage is a card game. Here it is used in contrast to "mind-numbing discussion." Thus it stands for something entertaining, rather than boring or afflicting. Language points 6. This lack of interest does not stem from pure selfishness or unalloyed contempt for other people's offspring. -The reason why I am not interested in it is not because I am selfish or look down upon other people's children. Her problems stem from her difficult childhood. He said that children's bad behavior often stems from boredom. unalloyed blessings unalloyed relief We had the perfect holiday - two weeks of unalloyed bliss. Part V (Paras. 9-15): Paragraph 9 In this paragraph the author criticizes parents who try to make the selection of colleges for their children. 1) The most infuriating conversation is the one where the parent clearly seeks a decisive career-validating moment of emotional closure. - The most annoying conversation is the one where the parent tries to be emotionally settled once for all by selecting for the child a good college that guarantees his or her future career. 2) "closure"-when an event or a period of time is brought to an end, or the feeling that something has been completely dealt with. Funerals help give people a sense of closure. 3) "economic mirth"-happiness and contentment with economic success 4) " . issuing a sotto voce taunt to parents of the less gifted" -. sneering or laughing quietly at those parents of less gifted children 5) "their children's destinations"-their children's entry into top universities Discussion questions Language points 7. Such individuals believe that securing admission to a top-flight university provides child with an irrevocable passport to success- Such people believe that if a child succeeds in getting admission to a first-rate university, then he or she will be guaranteed successful future. He's one of our top-flight engineers. The decision will not be irrevocable until everyone concerned has been consulted. Closing the factory would irrevocably alter the character of the local community for the worse. Paragraph 10 In this paragraph the author airs his view, which is different from that of the parent mentioned in the preceding paragraph. He argues that a good university does not necessarily guarantee a successful career, and asserts that parents' responsibility does not end when their children leave home for university. 1) " . age seventeen. Or twenty-one"-a child is supposed to enter college at seventeen and graduate at twenty-one
2)"first-class screwups"-absolute and hopeless failures 3)"end up on welfare or skid row"-eventually live on social welfare for their survival Discussion questions Language points 8.In real life,some children get the finest educations but still become first-class screwups.-In real life,some very promising children with very good schooling turn out to be complete failures. I recon I've passed the physics,but I'm sure I screwed chemistry up. Having the car stolen completely screwed up our holiday plans. We really screwed up when we invited Jane and two of her ex-boyfriends to the party. Paragraph 11 In this paragraph the author gives an illustration of the second category/group of people who are obsessed with college selection.They are disillusioned parents whose children are unlikely to enter prestigious universities. 1)".their Brand X children aren't going to make the cut"-.their children fall into the generic or common variety that are not likely to achieve much and cannot possibly be admitted to prestigious universities."To make the cut"is an informal American expression that means "to attain a particular goal."To "make the cut"literally means to be accepted into a sports team. 2)"the glamourless institutions their progeny are skulking off to"-the obscure universities their children are going to,which they feel too ashamed to let others know about. 3)"whose capitals only repeat winners on Jeopardy!can name."-whose state capitals are so obscure that only people who often win on game shows like Jeopardy!can name Discussion questions What does the author mean by "those grandiose delivery-room dreams of Amherst, Bard,and Duke are suddenly going up in smoke"? The author means that beautiful dreams which those parents have cherished since children were born are now totally smashed and have disappeared."Amherst,Bar and Duke"are three prestigious private universities in the United States. Language work 9.Bashfully,shamefacedly,miserably,these parents now mumble the names of the glamourless institutions their progeny are skulking off to.-,Embarrassedly,guiltily, sorrowfully,these parents now dare not utter loudly the names of those low-grade institutions where their children are quietly entering because they are ashamed of themselves. His numerous progeny are scattered all over the country. I thought I saw someone skulking in the bushes-perhaps we should call the police. He was skulking over there behind the shed. As I skulked up to the window,I heard the sound of voices. Paragraph 12
2) "first-class screwups"-absolute and hopeless failures 3) "end up on welfare or skid row"-eventually live on social welfare for their survival Discussion questions Language points 8. In real life, some children get the finest educations but still become first-class screwups. -In real life, some very promising children with very good schooling turn out to be complete failures. I recon I’ve passed the physics, but I’m sure I screwed chemistry up. Having the car stolen completely screwed up our holiday plans. We really screwed up when we invited Jane and two of her ex-boyfriends to the party. Paragraph 11 In this paragraph the author gives an illustration of the second category/group of people who are obsessed with college selection. They are disillusioned parents whose children are unlikely to enter prestigious universities. 1) ". their Brand X children aren't going to make the cut"-. their children fall into the generic or common variety that are not likely to achieve much and cannot possibly be admitted to prestigious universities. "To make the cut" is an informal American expression that means "to attain a particular goal. " To "make the cut" literally means to be accepted into a sports team. 2) "the glamourless institutions their progeny are skulking off to" 一 the obscure universities their children are going to, which they feel too ashamed to let others know about. 3) "whose capitals only repeat winners on Jeopardy! can name." - whose state capitals are so obscure that only people who often win on game shows like Jeopardy! can name Discussion questions What does the author mean by "those grandiose delivery-room dreams of Amherst, Bard, and Duke are suddenly going up in smoke"? The author means that beautiful dreams which those parents have cherished since children were born are now totally smashed and have disappeared. "Amherst, Bar and Duke" are three prestigious private universities in the United States. Language work 9. Bashfully, shamefacedly, miserably, these parents now mumble the names of the glamourless institutions their progeny are skulking off to. -,Embarrassedly, guiltily, sorrowfully, these parents now dare not utter loudly the names of those low-grade institutions where their children are quietly entering because they are ashamed of themselves. His numerous progeny are scattered all over the country. I thought I saw someone skulking in the bushes-perhaps we should call the police. He was skulking over there behind the shed. As I skulked up to the window, I heard the sound of voices. Paragraph 12