写作的重要性6分最低限,只要结构不出错,得分应该为9分。 评判作文 四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。 内容不跑题即可,注意:1.不要妄图以情动人:2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜 结构上牢记总分总:先写主题句( Topic Sentence),再写分论点,最后写总结句( Conclusion 语言最重要,往往使评分产生重大差异,语言要模仿和包装。 基本表达 u>: it is generally/widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越来越: be increasingly+adj, be on the rise, the growing number of 万能理由( Omnipotence) 1.方便: convenient/ convenience 2.效率: efficient/efficiently! efficiency 3.节省和浪费: save time/money/space; economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish 4.人的心理健康: independent, cooperative, competitive considerate, confident, creative, sociable perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative 5.人的身体健康:heah, disease, strong, streng, energetic 6. A%: colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax ired, boring, lonely 7.环境: environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8.安全和危险:safe, danger,risk 9. 42A: experience, social experience, enter the society 10. AFF: humane fair, unfair, help assist, freedom freely 写完之后修改注意:(内容方面尽量不要修改) 1、字母大小写 2、怪符号 3、单词拼写 4、主谓一致 5、动词时态 6、名词单复数 实例 题目: Bicycles-- An Important Means of Trans port in China提纲:(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及(2)和汽车的 比较(3)自行车在中国的前途 core: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicyde, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to leam and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesnt ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn o expensive so Chinese can afford it. It doesnt need any oi, and it can t cause the polusion. All of these are the good eeds compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modem bicycles Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can ee that thousands of people-man and woman, old and young--ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called the kingdom of bicycles 注:1.第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。 2 During the rush hour分词结构开头 3.破折号内容为同位语句式多变化 Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second
写作的重要性 6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。 评判作文 四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。 内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。 结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。 语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。 基本表达 人们认为：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that 越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of 万能理由（Omnipotence） 1. 方便：convenient/ convenience 2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish 4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative 5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic 6. 娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lonely 7. 环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty 8. 安全和危险：safe, danger, risk 9. 经验：experience, social experience, enter the society 10. 人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely 写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改） 1、字母大小写 2、怪符号 3、单词拼写 4、主谓一致 5、动词时态 6、名词单复数 实例一 题目：Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的 比较（3）自行车在中国的前途 Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles. Score: 14 Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”. 注：1. 第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。 2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。 3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。 Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second
riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents 注:1. Compared with cars分词结构开头 2. be superior to/ be inferior to优于/低于 3. thirst, second,thid英语语言有层次感,信号词 4. cheap便宜,最好用 Inexpensive 5 be good for health对健康有好处(万能理由) 6. Moreover表示递进 In my opinion, the future of bicyde is very promising Since China is a developing country and has a large population think, riding bicycle is approprate to chinese present conditions It will be an important means of transportation for quite a 注: promIsing有前途的 a promising young man Score: 11 There millions of bicydes in todays China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people' s daily lives Because to ride a bicyde is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle ne eds just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider's strength, bicydes are popular all over the world, especially in 注:第一句应该用 there be结构 Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car. I think the population of China' s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it's quality will be improved I、对比观点选择题:1.有人认为……;2.另外一些人认为……;3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段) 实例二99年6月真题 Outline:1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法 How should we read Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modem science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them Since we cant read all the books and we shouldn ' t read bad books, we must read selectively But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively Who's right? i think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构: 启) Paragraph I:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点:(2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Score:14分 should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(A) 第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构: (承) Paragraph Il:(1)提出一种观点或优点:(2)本段的支持性分论点:(3)本段总结(可以省略) Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are any bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them since we can't read all the books an houldn tread bad books, we must read selectively.(3) 注:1.本段总分总结构 2. they argue that they think that 3. with the development of.随着……的发展
riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents. 注：1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。 2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于 3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词 4. cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive 5. be good for health 对健康有好处（万能理由） 6. Moreover 表示递进 In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time. 注：promising 有前途的 a promising young man Score: 11 There millions of bicycles in today’s China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in people’s daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle will not cost so much money, to park a bicycle ne eds just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the rider’s strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China. 注：第一句应该用there be结构 Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a developing country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car. I think the population of China’s bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that it’s quality will be improved. I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为……； 2.另外一些人认为……； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。（最好写成4段） 实例二 99年6月真题 Reading Selectively Or Extensively? Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择2. 有人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的想法 How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively. But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively. Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field. 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构： （启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Score: 14分 How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（启） 注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构： （承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。 Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.（承） 注：1. 本段总分总结构 2. they argue that = they think that 3. with the development of... 随着……的发展
4. what's more递进关系, moreover 5.bad= pornographic色情的& violent暴力的 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(转) Paragraph II:(1)承上启下的过渡句:(2)提出另一种观点或缺点:(3) 本段的支持性分论点(4)本段总(可以省略)。 But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively. (R) 注:1.But转折词(信号词) 2. they emphasize that= they think that 3 today' s society is not what it was现代社会今昔非比 4.许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge 获取知识 acquire/get knowledge 5 knows nothing→lite; he may be useless→ he may not be of great use to the society后者比前者更委婉 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(合) hIV:(1)平衡两种 Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields and read selectively in one field. (a) Score:11分 When it comes to reading some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better 注:结构非常好,可以套用。 Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books Those good books can give us pleasure and knowedge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books 注:1 people,who.,应去掉逗号,改为限制性定语从句 2 as many as bad books改为 as many as bad ones 3. lead us to the wrong way改为 lead sb. astray 4. they suggest that=they think that 5 touch碰(闪光点词汇:如教材P7: shouldering the responsibility of doing sth.肩负起责任) But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of infomation. So, they can easily come to the conclusion hat " to know more. to read more. So they believe that reading extensively is better 注:1.hod认为同样表示“ think"的词还有 argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree,hold 2. the best book在西方国家是“圣经”的意思 3. to know more, to read more错误,中式英语 To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading 范文22 Is Television a Blessing or a Curse? Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people's lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse 注: it is generally accepted that人们通常认为 As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better infomed about current events allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating. The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into LE: 1. As is often pointed out by some people Some people think that 2.“使…”不用make,而用keep, allow, offer However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing. They argue that it has brought about many serious problems. The major one is its effects on young people. They are now so used to getting their infomation education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened. Even worse than that, vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes, distort their viewpoints towards
4. what's more 递进关系，moreover 5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句； （2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3） 本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。 But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（转） 注：1. But 转折词（信号词） 2. they emphasize that = they think that 3. today's society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4. 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge； 获取知识 acquire/ get knowledge 5. knows nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉 典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；（2）给出自己的观点。 Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合） Score: 11分 When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better. 注：结构非常好，可以套用。 Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books. 注：1.“people, who...,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。 2. as many as bad books 改为 as many as bad ones 3. lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb. astray 4. they suggest that = they think that 5. touch 碰（闪光点词汇：如教材P7：shouldering the responsibility of doing sth. 肩负起责任） But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better. 注：1. hold 认为 同样表示“think”的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold 2. the best book 在西方国家是“圣经”的意思 3. to know more, to read more 错误，中式英语 To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading. 范文22. Is Television a Blessing or a Curse? Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people’s lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse. 注：it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为 As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating. The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room. 注：1. As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that 2. “使……”不用make，而用keep, allow, offer However, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a blessing. They argue that it has brought about many serious problems. The major one is its effects on young people. They are now so used to getting their information, education and entertainment from television that their literacy as well as physical ability has been greatly weakened. Even worse than that, vulgar commercials and indecent programs may cultivate their bad tastes, distort their viewpoints towards
human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted telev. In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certa in, ision in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society 范文5 Travelling People who like travelling have their reasons. They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical leaming. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chande for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have 注: geographical and historica押尾韵,如:押头韵 clear.&cean Those who dislike travelling have the ir reasons. They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy. For example traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights of ten tires you In practice, travelling does more good than harm. If your finance and health pemit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time. It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to ike and love 注:1. in practice= I think2. does more good than ham好处比坏处多,其他表达方法: be superior to/ inferior to比如:the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3. enable li 范文1. Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? Atest of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been leaming English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills 使句孑具有表现力的手段:1、用形容词修饰名词:2、副词修饰动词、副词修饰形容词 On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English leamers. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion denves from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from thei on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them goodluck 3 oursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than ham. Since China will continue its policy of openi and refom, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college 范文21. Should smoking be banned? Should smoking be banned Answers to this question vary greatly. Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed. And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship. Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go 注:1. vary greatly许多种2. be in favor of= agree/ be of the opinion that 3. get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed使人神清气爽 4. Giving and being given给与被给。主、被动关系在英文中用现在、过去分词表达 But other people consider it very hamful to people' s health. They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second. And they have heard the doctors warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack. In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may ause fire accidents thus it has become a major threat to people' s life and property 注:1 They have heard the official reports that..官方报告表明..2 be more likely to更有可能,更容易3. chance可能 There is some truth in both arguments, but human s life and property outweighs anything else. If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the govemment? Without cigarettes, can't we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注:1. outweigh比…重要,同样的表达: be superior to/be inferior to。 overweight超重2.最后用两句反问句结尾,非常精妙 课后作业 Private Cars 写成4段的首段写法 O In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China. People' s attitud toward private cars varies widely With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car. Yet, rson to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly./ is guite of the
human life to such a degree that their minds might be corrupted. In summary, television has both advantages and disadvantages. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, television in itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determines its value to society. 范文5. Travelling People who like travelling have their reasons. They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have. 注：geographical and historical 押尾韵，如：押头韵 clear & clean Those who dislike travelling have their reasons. They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy. For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you. In practice, travelling does more good than harm. If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time. It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love. 注：1. in practice = I think 2. does more good than harm 好处比坏处多，其他表达方法：be superior to/ inferior to 比如：the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3. enable 使 范文1. Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker. Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely. A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills. 使句子具有表现力的手段：1、用形容词修饰名词；2、副词修饰动词、副词修饰形容词 On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck. In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study. 范文21. Should smoking be banned? Should smoking be banned? Answers to this question vary greatly. Some people are in favor of the idea of smoking. They always say that it can get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed. And they also say that giving and being given cigarettes is a sign of friendship. Therefore, they carry cigarettes with them wherever they go. 注：1. vary greatly 许多种2. be in favor of = agree/ be of the opinion that 3. get rid of the tiredness and make them refreshed 使人神清气爽 4. Giving and being given 给与被给。主、被动关系在英文中用现在、过去分词表达。 But other people consider it very harmful to people’s health. They have heard the official reports that one person in the world dies from smoking every second. And they have heard the doctor’s warning that smokers are more likely to have lung cancer and to increase their chances of having heart attack. In addition, smoking pollutes the air and may cause fire accidents. Thus it has become a major threat to people’s life and property. 注：1.They have heard the official reports that ... 官方报告表明.. 2. be more likely to 更有可能，更容易3. chance 可能 There is some truth in both arguments, but human’s life and property outweighs anything else. If smoking brings us illness and death, why not have it banned by the government? Without cigarettes, can’t we come up with better ways to express our friendship and to make us refreshed?注：1. outweigh 比……重要，同样的表达：be superior to/ be inferior to。overweight 超重2. 最后用两句反问句结尾，非常精妙。 课后作业 Private Cars 写成4段的首段写法： ① In recent years, with fast economic growth, private cars have appeared in many families in China. People's attitude toward private cars varies widely. ② With the increase in the general standard of living, some ordinary Chinese families begin to afford a private car. Yet, people's opinions of private cars vary from person to person/ public attitude toward it varies greatly/ widely./ is quite of the
contrary! differs sharply 3 In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People' s views on/opinions of owing a private car vary widely 写成3段的首段写法 With the development of moden society/ science and technology, /With the improvement of people' s living standard more and more people can own private cars cars are entering ordinary families the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言) 支持段的主题句: ome people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ it is widely accepted that there are some dvantages of owning a private car. There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely 支持段的分论点: O il First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation 2 Afid Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/raining days/sand storm B *M Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her caree 否定段的主题句:① However( Nonetheless/ Nevertheless//Bu, there are some disadvantages of owing a private car Every coin has two sides 2 While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they creat introduce/make 3 Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/problems/negative effects 4 Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/limits However, private cars are not without shortcomings/faults e Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that O However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced 8 Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences 否定段的分论点: ①占有空间 on the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space ②交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are mo likely to happen ③污染环境 What's more/ln addition, private cars give off/discharge/ release co which pollute the environment/air 注意:所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的,就是比较 superordinate的词:而下义词就是具体的东西,即 subordinate的东西。 第四段(总结段)的写法 O Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved 2 Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us B Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and dependence a private car can bring will not be elminated 4 Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life 选择题型变体逻辑结构( My View on Sth 选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构: Paragraph:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点:(2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法 Paragraph Il:(1)提出作者观点(本文主题句) (2)举例加以论证 Paragraph‖:(1)总结全文(再次强调作者观点) 范文17 My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life 注:1. consensus相同意见
contrary./ differs sharply. ③ In recent few years, the phenomenon/ issue/ problem of owning a private car has been brought to public attention/ in the limelight. People's views on/ opinions of owing a private car vary widely. 写成3段的首段写法： With the development of modern society/ science and technology, / With the improvement of people's living standard, more and more people can own private cars. cars are entering ordinary families. the growing number of people/ people in ever increasing numbers can have access to private cars.(此句是引言) 支持段的主题句： Some people claim that/ As is pointed out that/ It is generally believed that/ It is widely accepted that, there are some advantages of owning a private car. There is no doubt that private cars benefit people hugely. 支持段的分论点： ① 方便 First, private cars provide people with the most convenient form of transportation. ② 舒适 Second, it is comfortable for people to travel in, especially in changeable weather/ raining days/ sand storm . ③ 炫耀 Third, only a private car can show a person's social status/ achievement/ success/ prosperity in his or her career. 否定段的主题句：① However (Nonetheless/ Nevertheless/ But), there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides. ② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make. ③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects ④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits. ⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults. ⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that...... ⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced. ⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences. 否定段的分论点： ① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space. ② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen. ③ 污染环境 What's more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air. 注意：所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的，就是比较superordinate的词；而下义词就是具体的东西，即subordinate的东西。 第四段（总结段）的写法： ① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, I'm sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved. ② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us. ③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated. ④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life. 选择题型变体逻辑结构（My View on Sth.） 选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构： Paragraph I:（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。 Paragraph II:（1）提出作者观点（本文主题句）； （2）举例加以论证。 Paragraph III:（1）总结全文（再次强调作者观点） 范文17. My View on Fate There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life. 注：1. consensus 相同意见