1) Analysis of the original A)Grammatical analysis B)Stylistic analysis
1) Analysis of the original: •A) Grammatical analysis •B) Stylistic analysis
A) Grammatical analysis (1)Sentence structure (2) Additional complication
A) Grammatical analysis: •(1) Sentence structure •(2) Additional complication
(1)Sentence structure he selection consists of two paragraphs, of which the first is composed of two sentences while the second paragraph is composed of three sentences. In the first paragraph the first is a compound sentence, composed of two coordinate clauses, each with an attributive clause embedded In this sense the sentence can be regarded as a compound complex one. The second is also a compound sentence, composed of three coordinate clauses. In the second paragraph, the first is a complex sentence, composed of a main clause and an elliptic object clause, which in turn has an attributive clause embedded; and at the end of the sentence there is a prepositional phrase, in which there is an attributive clause embedded, which is in the So. that. pattern with the clause introduced by that serving as adverbial of result
(1) Sentence structure： • The selection consists of two paragraphs, of which the first is composed of two sentences while the second paragraph is composed of three sentences. In the first paragraph, the first is a compound sentence, composed of two coordinate clauses, each with an attributive clause embedded. In this sense, the sentence can be regarded as a compound complex one. The second is also a compound sentence, composed of three coordinate clauses. In the second paragraph, the first is a complex sentence, composed of a main clause and an elliptic object clause, which in turn has an attributive clause embedded; and at the end of the sentence, there is a prepositional phrase, in which there is an attributive clause embedded, which is in the so… that… pattern with the clause introduced by that serving as adverbial of result
Sentence structure(continued) The second is a compound sentence, composed of two coordinate clauses, connected by a colon; in the first coordinate clause there is another clause embedded serving as the prepositional object; the second coordinate clause is composed of a clause and a past participle phrase, which has an attributive clause embedded, and in the attributive clause there are two coordinate infinitive phrases connected by rather than and each infinitive phrase has an object clause embedded. The third is a compound sentence composed of two coordinate clauses connected by for
Sentence structure (continued): • The second is a compound sentence, composed of two coordinate clauses, connected by a colon; in the first coordinate clause, there is another clause embedded serving as the prepositional object; the second coordinate clause is composed of a clause and a past participle phrase, which has an attributive clause embedded, and in the attributive clause, there are two coordinate infinitive phrases connected by rather than, and each infinitive phrase has an object clause embedded. The third is a compound sentence, composed of two coordinate clauses connected by for
()Additional complication The two sentences in the first paragraph do not present any additional complication, In the second paragraph however, the first sentence has a long prepositional phrase positioned at the end of the sentence, the second sentence begins with an adverb the third sentence has a parenthetic structure embedded after the first comma
(2) Additional complication： • The two sentences in the first paragraph do not present any additional complication. In the second paragraph, however, the first sentence has a long prepositional phrase positioned at the end of the sentence; the second sentence begins with an adverb; the third sentence has a parenthetic structure embedded after the first comma