PracticeRevisethefollowing run-onsentences. Women no longer need to move into thetraditionally male professions theyhave alreadyopened most of the doors to desirable careerpaths. Utah is famous for her scenery and friendly peopleand I love living in this state particularly
Practice Revise the following run-on sentences • Women no longer need to move into the traditionally male professions they have already opened most of the doors to desirable career paths. • Utah is famous for her scenery and friendly people and I love living in this state particularly
(3)MisplacedModifiers误置修饰语，亦称“修饰语错位”，在修饰语和其所修饰的中心词之间不恰当地夹进了其他成分。. He sold the old car to the man with leather seats. The robber was described as a six-foot-tall manwith a mustache weighing 15o pounds.Corrected: He sold the old car with leather seats tothe man.· Corrected: The robber was described as a 15o-pound, six-foot-tall man with a mustache
(3) Misplaced Modifiers 误置修饰语，亦称“修饰语错位”，在修饰语和其所 修饰的中心词之间不恰当地夹进了其他成分。 • He sold the old car to the man with leather seats. • The robber was described as a six-foot-tall man with a mustache weighing 150 pounds. • Corrected: He sold the old car with leather seats to the man. • Corrected: The robber was described as a 150- pound, six-foot-tall man with a mustache
PracticeIdentifythemisplacedwordorwordsineachsentence.1. Our team didn't even score once.2. She is teaching a seminar this term on marketeconomy at the Osaka International University.3. The city almost spent twenty million dollars on thenew stadium.4. Tony bought an old car from a crooked dealer witha faulty transmission.5. The suburbs nearly had five inches of rain
Practice Identify the misplaced word or words in each sentence. 1. Our team didn't even score once. 2. She is teaching a seminar this term on market economy at the Osaka International University. 3. The city almost spent twenty million dollars on the new stadium. 4. Tony bought an old car from a crooked dealer with a faulty transmission. 5. The suburbs nearly had five inches of rain
(4)DanglingModifiers. To write well, good books must be read.. Corrected: To write well, I must read good books. To write the proposal, research must be done.· Corrected: To write the proposal, the professormust first do some research.非限定性动词短语作状语时，易形成悬垂性修饰语
(4) Dangling Modifiers • To write well, good books must be read. • Corrected: To write well, I must read good books. • To write the proposal, research must be done. • Corrected: To write the proposal, the professor must first do some research. 非限定性动词短语作状语时，易形成悬垂性修饰语
PracticePleaserevisethefollowing sentences with danglingmodifiers.Thumbing through the magazine, her eyes1.automatically noticed the cosmetic ads.To please the visitors, a cross talk was performed2.On entering the teacher's office, a terrestrial3.globe caught his attention.Though only seventeen, the army accepted his4.application.返回本章目录
Practice Please revise the following sentences with dangling modifiers. 1. Thumbing through the magazine, her eyes automatically noticed the cosmetic ads. 2. To please the visitors, a cross talk was performed. 3. On entering the teacher's office, a terrestrial globe caught his attention. 4. Though only seventeen, the army accepted his application