°∴ suggests that even moderate exercise may lead to reduced iron in the blood of women. (Para. 1) suggests that even exercise of a mild type may cause a loss of iron in the blood of women
• …suggests that even moderate exercise may lead to reduced iron in the blood of women. (Para. 1) …suggests that even exercise of a mild type may cause a loss of iron in the blood of women
We found that women who were normally inactive and then started a program of moderate exercise showed evidence of iron loss,.(Para. 2) We found that women who were not In 1 the habit of doing physical exercises but then suddenly began a program of exercise of middle degree showed signs of iron loss
• We found that women who were normally inactive and then started a program of moderate exercise showed evidence of iron loss, … (Para. 2) We found that women who were not in the habit of doing physical exercises but then suddenly began a program of exercise of middle degree showed signs of iron loss, …
Women who consumed additional n meat or took iron supplements were able to bounce back,-.(Para. 3) Women who ate more meat than they usually did or took iron-added pills were able to return to their normal, healthy state
• Women who consumed additional meat or took iron supplements were able to bounce back,… (Para. 3) Women who ate more meat than they usually did or took iron-added pills were able to return to their normal, healthy state,…
But the new exercisers who followed tnl their normal diet showed a decrease in iron levels.(Para. 3) But those women who began a program of exercise but went on with their diet as usual showed a decrease in iron levels
• But the new exercisers who followed their normal diet showed a decrease in iron levels. (Para. 3) But those women who began a program of exercise but went on with their diet as usual showed a decrease in iron levels
affecting one in four female teenagers and one in five women aged 18 to 45, respectively.(Para. 4) affecting one out of four female teenagers and (also affecting) one out of five women who are aged from 18 to 45 Please note that“ respectively” modifies 4one in four female teenagers and one in five women aged 18 to 45
• …affecting one in four female teenagers and one in five women aged 18 to 45, respectively. (Para. 4) …affecting one out of four female teenagers and (also affecting) one out of five women who are aged from 18 to 45. Please note that “respectively” modifies “one in four female teenagers and one in five women aged 18 to 45”.